Yes! I was worried how it would roll out, but this is interesting! I hope he learns more from this and with some luck none too injured!
Chapter was fun, Thanks!
tbh I don't mind if you left the original SFX with just a note near it..
I didn't expect this! So he took the pain upon himself! Well now I want Aisha to push him away and try to bear it instead! Haha
Thanks!
Ah well, I liked it.
I think this is the authors way to avoid any ambiguity on their engagement, and the other supporters relationships. Maybe.
I enjoyed the portrail of their feelings when he told them the grave news. Quite a serious chapter, moving.
Expected, but what for? Exclusivity? eh. How about for making descendants more powerful? or maybe its a punishment from ages past? Maybe by the temple, or even by royalty. hm.