Page 22 bottom panel - That night we along with the white elves
Is this a translation error?
And it turns out you are translating the volume chapters instead of web comic or magazine, and there were no such partial chapter in them.
No problem man. You are doing a tremendous job and that too for free. Just pointed out some things to improve your proficiency at translating, that's all.
The sentence is "The party behind her is probably made up of advanced classes for more than half its member". For some reason, either I am not able to comprehend it well or the phrasing appears to be a bit weird.
Page 4, bottom left - They originally -> Then originally
Page 6, left panel - Does the hero's bloodline -> Is the hero's
Page 20, bottom panel - Wide-area detection works poorl -> poorly
Also page 24 left panel, the phrasing is a bit weird.
Wait until the next asspull - The memories of all the previous primordial gods flowing through Kintaro. The power of memories and feelings from the past - basically fairy tail
The Post Nut clarity that hits you after the sex and when he tells you to marry is one hell of a moment. Suddenly you start seeing everything rationally and think with your brain and not with your dick.
Page 13 has an untranslated bubble and Page 17 needs clean up for the skill. Other than these, I haven't found any errors.
Thanks for the release Silas.