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It's rushed and milquetoast. That's being generous. Naruto at least started with a compelling protagonist. This guy doesn't have a shred of personality. I can't see this lasting more than 2 volumes.

What a rushed exposition. Feels like it was going to be a reincarnation backstory but an editor told him people are tired of that.

I can't believe it, Dessacaras had a twin!

The water in a pool is constantly flowing though. Ignoring all the bodies, it could be considered more pure than a creek or a stream.

Except they do over explain everything else. Ideally you seamlessly weave in these worldbuilding details without a clunky narration or characters just vomiting up what should be obvious to everyone present.

Is Dino's jobbing streak finally over?

He's quite a bit older.

Leon's pretty insufferable this arc huh?

This fairytale recreation subplot and the archivist's involvement feel like forced melodrama. It only exists to raise the stakes that Karina might be killed, but Aurora would pursue Karina regardless. Just a hamfisted excuse for Eve to get more involved. It wouldn't be hard to fix it either...

Rest in Piss Oin.

...the antagonist is his manager at work. He made Lumbergh from the Office the big bad. This is a level of shamelessness I didn't think was possible.