There's nothing that bad about the series but I also feel like the genderbend is wasted. This could have just been "Regular Girl becomes an idol and sucks at it" and it would be exactly the same story.
I like that this ended. Not in a bad way. This was as long as it needed to be. I don't think they really deserve to end up as a couple, but I had fun. Definitely one of the better bodyswap stories.
I don't know if this gets better written, but the first 15 chapters of this are so rough. You could re-arrange it to flow better. Not sure I want to spend time on the raw site either
I watch medical dramas and surgery shows on TLC, but the discussion of how the surgery worked (and food related stand ins) actually made me nauseous. Don't know what that says about me.
This chapter makes it apparent that the reason nekotofu draws such bulky looking (but cute) outfits is because he can't seem to draw anything but thick bodies.
I saw mentions of chapter 6 and chapter 8 being a problem but as long as nothing like chapter 4 happens again I don't really see anything that bad in this one. Just add it to the list Mr FBI agent.
*Discussing what it means to be a magical girl*
"They are girls who can use magic, is there even a need for any more thoughts"
...You uncultured swine.
Agreed with @Benjansss , this is a Crossdress, not a Gender Swap.
But I like the story, it's appropriate for a one-shot. Just need an editor to go over it.
A version of Futaba with a different art style? One that I love? Color me intrigued. Moreover one where they have immediate control of their swapping? Different enough