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The nicest of all chapters.

@jia-art Dont take anything i say as nothing more as a cool headed critic. I been reading from the start, the work feels like it has so much potential with the amazing art, paneling and lettering. It just gives me this weird "script editor itch" if that even a word, seeing how it stumbles...

Yep, hallucination for sure. I really doubt Im wrong on this hallucination thing, but if you gonna pull some very obvious twist you should drop clues about how "this isnt real or avoid leaving it as a clifhanger" so the reader dont feel like you are trying to puff off some cheap emotional...