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What a dumbass! I knew something like this would happen as soon as he said he was training a super aggressive monster to be stronger.

I feel like the, "I don't like trouble." line that's so popular in these is super annoying. Its normal not to like trouble and to want to avoid it. Its not really a line that's needed. Now, a character that likes trouble would actually need that explained since that's more abnormal. As a visual...

@Psychronia This! All of this! It's like people blanked out and only started paying attention to the story after the flashback. They ignore how much of her perspective of people in this time line are based off of events that she caused in the last time line.

@IdanaHamz the text at the end is the merchant's thoughts. He pulled the MC back because he couldn't use appraisal on the MC and believed he was someone with enough power to protect the slave.

Enlightened centrist: Hmmm. Looks like some bandits are robbing a carriage. ...hard to tell who instigated this.

@johnpoop2529 Trying to figure out what that has to do with anything? Maybe you're to young to be reading this if thats the sort of question that pops into your mind.

@mxtsurim You're definitely right in the normal sense, but this is omegaverse. There are heat cycles and shit to deal with that would make consent and holding back a lot harder. Its wrong, but not the same level of wrong as our world.

@amanimal Well thats frustrating. I'll still check this out, but I always hate it when they mess up Irene's characterization...

Oh! Nice, I like it when the mc is strong, but not overpowered. A little more excited for this story now.

@mrmoooose23 That's fair. I see your point.

Police report of incident: "I don't believe... that you would dare to hit a girl." Said girl before getting hit.

@Supcolors its iffy writing. His intelligence level bounces all over the place.

@mrmoooose23 what do you mean awful parenting? He was a child talking about wanting to do an extremely dangerous job. Any good parent would try and discourage that especially when they're that young. Its not bad parenting to want your child to stay alive. That aside, how did the mc get dumber...

@xMerle ...That's the joke.

Dude, it's not just unnatural for women to be interested in herbs, most men would also be bored to tears.

God damned perverted teacher at the end. Actually made me laugh.

@Valve Characters can only be as smart as the writer.

@Afuckinowl Hotel is still not a great idea. What if people she knew observed her going in with a young looking teen? Probably won't happen, but there's always that possibility. Also, the daughter already had an idea of what was going on, why try and keep this a secret.

Really dumb, but it will help you pass the time if you're bored. 4/10 purely because the art.

@Reimos I can accept that theory. Sort like Game of Thrones logic. People who get brought back to life lose a part of themselves each time.. With him it's always brain cells.