@NightmareWeeb The grammar is absolutely not "100% fine", there are a few sentences that make zero sense, and even when it's understandable, it's super distracting. It doesn't mean they should stop translating, it just means they need an editor.
I will mind you, actually. Test all you want, but don't publish it as if it's a finished work. Now it's much less likely that someone who actually knows English will translate this chapter properly.