Thanks for the translation. Since you're taking suggestions, please use all-caps text and manga font so that it looks like other manga. I think the one people often use is "Wild Words", but even something like Comic Sans would be better than just using a standard font like you're doing now
Guys, just to clarify, I'm not the translator. A friend sent me this translation as a zip, and I just uploaded it. I don't know who the original translator actually is, so I put "Unknown" for the group