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I will never get why people like stories like this. The most common complaint I've seen leveraged at fiction is that it's "predictable" and dark stories like this always seem very predictable to me, any ounce of levity is a setup for something bad to happen and it's just a matter of how long the...

I get the impression so far that the premise of this story is going to be one of those "everybody is an asshole, and if you get attached to any of the characters that aren't evil the author is going to try and punish you for it." stories. I'll be frank I can't think of a more boring premise than...

I think Nale might be the most boring character I've ever seen in... anything, not bad or good, just a complete and utter flatline devoid of anything that could make her notable in any way good or bad. She feels like a cardboard box the protagonist had to bring into his house because it would be...

I tried it because the premise hooked me. The entire story just devolves into a brother-sister incest plotline really quickly, which I don't like and has me really relating to how the protagonist wants to take a nap. A lot of the actual action happens off screen like with the terrorists and the...

For CH. 338 I would have the cat start out in the cat bed and then end up on the normal bed.

I don't usually give things a 1 very often, but the story in this is rushed and incomprehensible, and the art is bad to the point of being unrecognizable, inside the first four pages of chapter 1 the kid has already grown up, gotten non-specific powers, and now he's fighting... an old man? an...

I had to stop reading this entirely by chapter 2. The conversation with "god" or whatever went on for far too long and it didn't look like it was ever going to wrap up it's little hamster wheel "god says something, protagonist grabs her by the head." shtick that chapter. It's too dense with...

How many more times do you think they'll keep trying to pull exactly the same surprise twist, or put exactly the same characters up against the MC? Is it possible that in a surprise twist that nobody sees coming eventually the MC manages to find a way out of a situation on their own? Because at...

I don't know if I like this, on the one hand they seem to understand D&D isn't just a rigidly defined rulebook that you must never stray from(I'm lookin at you Goblin Slayer), but on the other hand the twists here seem kinda predictable in a bad way so far. Overall I would say this: while...

Even if you're going all in on the revenge side of this, this sucks, we don't get to see him beat up the guy who gave him 28 punches, we see basically nothing of what he did to the guards, and the primary antagonist is mind wiped and given a different body inside of what? 30 seconds? So we...

This seems to be a textbook case of "The author knows these characters, so why should you?" and the stakes have escalated far too quickly without interesting antagonists or protagonists, you've basically got a Yandre with a bunch of brainless brainwashed people against characters who probably...