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yep, stopped reading page 2 to come and see if someone else got weirded out like I did, haha.

These panty shots ... I feel ... conflicted.

Interjections with Syl's side are weirdly placed, I'd say almost as if the 2 pages in the middle (12&13) are supposed to be right before the last one instead of being randomly in the middle, it would make sense flow wise. Can the team confirm they aren't misplaced/misordered ? She is, I'm...

What a chad, tbf it's not that bad, I might have exaggerated a bit but the names being all over the place in ch11 and a few bubbles not making sense really stuck out to me (things like "Miria/Milia/Millia" or "Melville/Merville" over only 10 pages, knowing they did 10 chapters before that too...

I wouldn't mind you redoing ch11 honestly, it was such a mess, which is a shame cause it was supposed to be so funny, but the previous TL killed its mood (not that I'm not grateful I could read it, but having stuff like the name of a character spelled in 3 different manners on the same page...

Love her already, also feet are backwards page 3. :pepehmm:

Really ? 0.3s seems kinda slow for a blink

I miss Judith. :meguuusad:

You did good, still a few mistakes a good proofread would sort out easily, like some random capitalization or a few missing words and minor typos, else it's an overall nice improvement. Good job.

Suggestions : use a less stylized font don't put shadows under text get someone to proofread, preferably a native english speaker who's got good grammar and can spot even the smallest mistakes

Classic Mekarabeam and classic Kuchikarabazooka, old-school animu references. From the mouth makes the sound of a metal slug boss tho, so it's better imo, IYKYK.

huuuuh excuse me but this should have been TL'd as Jonas Gahr Støre, canonically, norway Biden is correct.

git gud casul caroline von bozel ? more like caroline von deceased

English Adjective offical Misspelling of official. (joking, don't take me too seriously :p, thanks for continuing this, love you)

"I hurt one of my 6 fingers" I love spotting that kind of mistake heh

Everyone : "nooour, loli, booba no want" Meanwhile : girl has two left feet page 4

Short Tsuruya.

You forgot your pen of homa, Hu Tao ... wait, no.

Dude has 2 right hands page 6 hehe

That norway joke takes me back, still waiting for someone to include the "yen to norwegian krone conversion" in a TL note, tho.