I'm liking this so far but like some peeps have said, the current chaps are way too short, especially compared to the first which was 40; the chapters have been literally decreasing in size from 40-18-17- to now just 10/11.
This is alright so far but for a supposedly calculating and smart man he gets rather enraged and emotional quite easily...Besides that, I can kinda see the "character development" but so far it's barely starting; MC hates people and is manipulative but in this latest slew it seems our MC might...
Alright this definitely feels too rushed like seriously an arc seems to end every 3 or 4 chapters with each one introducing a new setting and characters. Honestly a bit ridiculous. The forced and rushed introduction of "emotional" topics doesn't help either
I'm gonna complain because I can, so you "but its free" people can shut up; this translation needs some serious proofreading. Like seriously, what's with the constant mismatch of he and she? This is basic English stuff that I'm sure even basic spell checkers can spot.
Thank god that useless jim thing was removed; part of translating is making it understandable for the readers and making them learn something one off like that isnt helpful