I normally don't comment, but I honestly think this translation is fine. I appreciate all the work this no group team puts out. Without these kind folks, I'd be left im the dark - I don't enjoy attempting to read the raw.
To those complaining about the translation, why don't you all fork some...
I saw that you have ch 17-21. Where can I read it?! I appreciate the work! I understand that this story is great and you were kind enough to translate it for us that can’t. Hope I can hear a response.