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Small typos Page 7: You haven't extend her lifespan -> either didn't extend or haven't extended. (Probably the second but they could both work) Page 10: They surpass human in -> surpass humans Page 10: Concubi and vampires are two of the representative demon races -> are two representatives of...

Weird question: How does Alice get to go to America? She is a Japanese middle-schooler. I felt it a bit for the first camp, but going international is kinda breaking my suspension of disbelief a bit. I still think it'll be a nice story, but I'd prefer it to be a bit more grounded.

This chapter is pretty chill. The sandwiches do look really good though. I am annoyed though by 1 thing in this chapter: Be consistent in your character positions! In this one page, the adventurer's group are sitting in 3 different configurations. It's so tilting to notice this.

While Sumire has always kinda been a bad person (that we still like), I do not like the way Yusei used alcohol to trick convince her. Feels a bit scummy for him; at least from what we've seen so far.

No Reina in your squad?

Two chapters and no trademark Erotica? What restraint they're showing this time!

I found the movie that was used for the title. A movie by the original title of Druk: https://www.imdb.com/title/tt10288566/ That movie is about using yourself as an experiment (in that case the effects of alcohol on their work flow, mental strain and social encounters) and I think this chapter...

I can see the Chiyo comparisons that people are making (I agree), but the first person that popped into my mind when I saw her was actually Kishika (sword-girl). I felt they were closer in their gimmick: people that present an extremely serious exterior and are bound to their creed from their...

I'll go against the grain and talk about something that hasn't been mentioned yet: That Matsurida follow-up on the classic "Pain, Pain, go Away!" was extremely charming! Also, can we at least wait until the new character actually does something before jumping on her? Since, she used Yukito's...

Hmm, is this the first chapter where there might actually be a legitimate argument? While a lot of games are pretty trash, it still took the work of multiple people to put them to market and usually have at least 1 redeeming quality. Also, a game being bad is a subjective viewpoint and is...

Small typo? on page 2 (bottom panel): Tanabe-sensei says "Speople often tell me" which, I think, is supposed to be "So people often tell me" (unless it's a thick accent?, but I do not see that repeated)

Overall looks really nice. Really assertive women are my jam and I do like seeing pretty people who have been hurt by their beauty and trying to hide that; I think it's a really good story setup for a character. I do have a question: Why the Fantasy tag? Is it something that is revealed later...

I'm Canadian, so both versions of English? I'm a lot more familiar with using the term 'warning' in that instance.

Small typo in panel 2: I think you meant to write cautioning, but forgot the o (still a strange way to write that sentence, but meh)

Can someone explain how Eira's pants work on that full cover image? Are they fastened one third of the way down on her butt and hang super low in front or is it above her butt and the part above that is some strangely drawn back muscles? I think it makes more sense the second way, but it...

This is going to sound like a rude question, but I mean it seriously: what gender is Yamori? The plot is presented to them being male dressing up as a woman, but, not sure why, I almost expected the chapter to end revealing them to be female that always dressed up as a man, but went back to...

This chapter felt a bit fast for my taste? It feels like we skipped ahead by like a couple of months in a couple of pages by really accelerating Lily's development.

It's overall cute that she finally had the ability to stand and talk for herself. It shows that she is not a total failure and actually is a real person, just not comfortable with socializing (might be related to why she doesn't care about romance anymore?)

I wasn't sure after the first chapter what direction this would go in, but I really liked what they showed in the second chapter. The characters have a lot more depth, and the author is willing to show that. The whole lesson with the superior of there being an actual person beyond appearances is...

There's a tiny typo on the first page: It says chapter 10 instead of chapter 11. I don't know if if was incorrectly modified of if it's in the raws.