@SumTingWong02 I'm writing a comment not an essay. I think you get the gist of what I was saying, when writing a comment my first thought isn't "oh was the punctuation & gramma right".
Why does he just find a metal hammer and pickaxe out of nowhere how's he gonna find that when the world should be panicking about monsters. And why are none of the characters showing worry like a full city has just disappeared like a nuke went off because the MC wished it away and hes just gonna...
Theres to much text man, like get on with it we don't need all these monologues recounting what happened or telling us how skills work we're not retarded just get on with it.