The plot seems cool and the art is awesome. Although I hope for smoother translations as the currentl dialogue and narrative seems stuttered and a bit confusing.
I agree they should fix the 1st chapter. I was ready to drop this sotry due to the horrible translation but I went ot the comments to see any raves about the translations. Only reason I glanced at the other chapters.
for real for real, this plot feels really familiar and I think there is another exact story like this under a differnt name. The plots are running the exact same, except the other one has far better pacing . Not this rushed mess. Art is better too. Just can't remember the name.
The plot idea was..nice and typical. But the pacing of the events ( way too fast) basically made it poor. He got super-attached to his mentor way too fast. Imagine someone tripping and skinning their knee, crying about the pain (ㆆ_ㆆ). The maid then comes in with a first aid kit and dresses the...
I'm in chapter 7 and have yet to see any sign of crossdressing. Also, Apple did not Decide to become Rose's aid. She was basically forced/tricked/forcefully persuaded to become the maid.