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Hoping everyone gets out okay.

Liam is a better man than he believes himself to be, and although he'll claim to be an "evil lord" he can't stop himself doing the right thing.

That was a nice ending to a nice story. Don't cry because it ended, smile because it happened.

Well... the MC is a scumbag, but he was also seriously wronged. As long as he does some good between his wenching.

She's the Full Metal Apothecary.

I've missed this. Thanks for the update.

Thinking about it, a gravity attack could be pretty useful.

I'm guessing that the summon will deplete its power and disappear. Killing something like that would give a huge power boost, which probably isn't where the author wants to go.

Is the Priestess the Necromancer's sister?

It's not like they can be repaired. 10 million is probably the cost of replacing one.

Holo as an auntie makes sense, given the relative lifespans of elves and humans would mean she'll be around for Lily a lot longer than Weiss, but that same factor makes her a bad romantic interest.

The author knows what the audience wants.

Umm. Stuff. Stuff is happening. Sorry. That's all I've got.

Demonkind are a pragmatic people. If her brother died it's because he wasn't strong enough to live.

Nah, he'd have to give up a lot of power to be considered a god.

The MC feels like one of those non-characters people create for DND who has to be persuaded to help the party at every step. If your character doesn't want to be there, why should the audience?

When the party doesn't wait for the DM to complete the villain's monologue.

That's true, but she also belongs to the fire clan so perhaps that provides some protection against fire.

A great story.

Damn, that's pretty awful regarding your laptop. If I might make a suggestion going forwards, have an external hard drive you keep all your important stuff on.