each chapter is exposition after exposition 😭 so fast paced and dialogue heavy- i know you have to attract the readers attention in the first volume but
have a little bit of “show not tell” mixed in there
the amount of mixed signals i’m getting from this teacher and student
like-
do they have crushes on eachother?
are they just super close in a non creepy way???
5 pages in and i’m already shaking my head at the abusive behaviour 😭😭😭 honestly reading this as psychological drama makes it easier to digest-
we got our main girl who is being beaten and pressured from coal into diamond, no matter the cost