The arms being short look like they are meant to be pointed towards the viewer, and you just turned them to be more perpendicular. I would say the error is usually perspective rather than arm length.
Someone else answered but its short for "hardworking careerwoman", baribari meaning energetically or vigorously (i think derived from the sfx of crunching or grinding), career from english, and the working and woman parts being dropped from the abbreviation.
If you release before stonescape, aggregators will collect your worse tl, ruining the manga for everyone across the internet who doesn't read here.
"They should be reading on mangadex" isn't a valid stance, due to the corporate pressure on this site and groups that have already left.
So sniping...
Try to keep the lens flare off their faces unless really necessary, it looks bad here.
Also consider the angle, the lens flare should be on the line from the sun passing through the center of the camera, which you almost did but there are some extra circles off the line that don't make sense...
I am years late to this but have to point out, candidate 01 has the stats and likeness of a certain austrian painter.
Candidate 04 might be Bamboo Mañalac.
Not sure about the others but they are also probably based on famous people.
I would have said you are just uninformed, but after you reacted x to the other comments giving examples of how vast the physical difference is, you are delusional.
For most women it takes an enormous amount of effort and dedication to reach the strength of an average man, male physiology is...
Iirc when i read it a year ago, noa's speech was one of the better parts of the ln, which they reduced to 1 panel here. or maybe im thinking of a different thing she wrote later idk
Nah he said he is really excited and likes to get crushed and be unable to escape, in that situation. You cant fault her for interpreting that as consent to keep going. Maybe she should have stopped 1 panel earlier but he really did ask for it.
For your dildo analogy it would be like you are...
You mean on p6? The outfit is different from what she wears in ch24 which should be the same time period when they were kids, and the hair is wavy, so its probably someone else.
Page 31 has 'she' and 'her' which is incorrect since he thinks its a guy at that point.
@Septazia are you saying this got axed and has a shit ending, or is that just your guess?