@sausage0
The only thing I can "criticize" is that the pages look a bit blurry, and sometimes the color of the text is different, as on page 4.
other than that, I think your work is quite good, keep it up <3.
Why is it marked as completed?
They are still adding more chapters.
I'd love to see how it goes, but since it was on completed, I just haven't watched the series, until now.