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Already 7 volumes huh? I guess it must have something going for it if it's already that far along.

By the way, I don't think the series is becoming bi-weekly, it's just moving to a bi-weekly magazine. It seems more likely that it'll just be in every second issue.

The sound effect is on the next page, so I think it's supposed to be before the high five.

Isn't that what the cover page is? In the dark surrounded by giant onions.

Now I'm wondering if a fight against Nanami is what leads to Toki getting hospitalized in the future.

I'm picturing Opera in an old-timey full body striped swimsuit.

You know, it doesn't say they got married to each other. Though I'm sure it's intentionally ambiguous.

Don't use Motos, Lake Motosu is a real place being referenced.

A couple typos of "hygiene" on page 7 and page 10, and "museum" on page 12. Haven't seen any issues like this until now so I feel it's worth pointing out. you've also got "woah" where i think it should be "whoa", but that's more subjective

I counted 13 typos in this chapter, I think your proofreader might have been half asleep.

Surely the "swimin" or "swimini" grass/flowers is actually "suimin", meaning sleep?

It's a matter of trust. If they're willing to alter the art for their own purposes, what else might they be doing that we haven't noticed?

Since you plan to fix it, here's a list of other typos that I've seen in this chapter: 2: Geat -> Great 13: beacuse -> because 13: beause -> because 14: pleaseant -> pleasant 27: alot -> a lot Plus the aforementioned Colloseum -> Colosseum on pages 2, 8 (twice), 9, 29, 32. Fortunately all...

I was worried she might accidentally cut her hair with the hidden blade for a second there.

Probably doesn't. You can see their foreign conversation in wide speech bubbles, compared to the typical taller speech bubbles for Japanese writing.

Excellent use of low angle and foreshortening in the last panel to make the cat appear large and in charge.

@Dgame44 I'm not talking about those. When I said "chapter splash" I'm talking about the original pages that say "Chapter 2/3/4" with the chapter title underneath. I'm saying, as something to correct: The last two pages of chapter 1, as we have them, are actually the first two pages of chapter...

Shouldn't the last two pages each of chapters 1, 2, and 3 actually be the first two pages of the next chapters? It feels like you used the chapter splash pages as the start of each chapter, but typically there would be a page or two before them.