10 Ways to Raise a Dragon - Ch. 10 - Live With Your Words
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Artwork is amateurish and lackluster. Although it started with an interesting enough premise, 10 chapters in, I'm disappointed in the FMC's lack of apparent intelligence or ability to craft a beliavable lie, other that stating the actual truth that she received the baby in a box dropped off at her apartment door, how she got her new place, or failing to anticipate that malicious rumors could happen if she, a single student, was seen in public with an infant.
"I started a new part-time job, and got hired as a nanny to look after my new employer's baby. They're letting me stay in an apartment in this building so I can be close to the baby."
How hard is that?
Drama feels forced, the way the story is being carried feels sloppy. Dropping.
"I started a new part-time job, and got hired as a nanny to look after my new employer's baby. They're letting me stay in an apartment in this building so I can be close to the baby."
How hard is that?
Drama feels forced, the way the story is being carried feels sloppy. Dropping.
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