1LDK+JK Ikinari Doukyo? Micchaku!? Hatsu Ecchi!!? - Ch. 50

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Wow, 50 chapters! I am impressed that this series is still going strong.

Overall, this chapter is hot and intimate as always. I do like it when there's a chapter when they don't insert it in the basis of teasing/buildup. I do wish the author lean more into the message play aspect of the chapter by her flipping the guy over and then slowly work her hands down his body. Otherwise, good chapter.
 
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TBH, I think at this point, the series might benefit from not having sex scene every now and then. I kinda feel like it has got problem balancing the story and sex a bit and now I feel like sex scene is getting bland. (Maybe not exactly this chapter since the massage play is okay, but it starts to get bland sometimes in the others; I just feel like it's time I should get this out of my chest.)

I kinda feel like the story side was developing well and I want to see more of it, but then it just got into a limbo with half a chapter being bland sex scene that I felt like author was required to include, but have no new idea to execute, and it just took up the pages where story can progress more. And not knowing if we'll get sex scene in this chapter or not might even help build up suspense and hype for when we get one, too. That's my two cents.
 
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Are he's doing it raw? With some JK? And she's still haven't pregnant yet?

Early on, she didn't want to him to finish inside her but that was quickly dropped.

At this point, don't worry about it. If she gets pregnant, she gets pregnant. It would be too repetitive and jarring if they constantly bring up the concept of pregnancy.
 
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I am not really a fan of how the art style of this one changed. Compare this to chapter 5 to see what I am talking about.
 
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Are he's doing it raw? With some JK? And she's still haven't pregnant yet?
It's a 2D pornographic fiction series. Hang up your expectations of realistic consequences at the door.
 
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I am not really a fan of how the art style of this one changed. Compare this to chapter 5 to see what I am talking about.
Right? The biggest thing I've noticed is that all the way back to Ch 39, Hazuken's been hitting the gym to the point where I'm expecting the Bara tag to show up.
 

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