This is what I was talking about!
They don't have to have sex every single chapter. Well, they almost not this chapter, and I'll count that.
It becomes repetitive, predictable, and stale fast (you just can't find new situation for sex all the time unless you write them to become perverts). It also getting in the way of developing their character. (Sex scene normally takes about half the chapter, and half of the rest has to be used for story beat and daily life so you don't have much left to develop anything)
I'd still say this chapter is still lacking on all those; but it's a step in the right direction, and I want this to continue.
Art is kinda off sometimes lately though. Especially Akane in the early pages of this chapter
