A Banished Sage’s Progress to Discovering the World: The Story of What Happened When I Freed Myself from My Childhood Friend - Ch. 25 - As Expected, …

Dex-chan lover
Joined
May 15, 2019
Messages
860
I'll just put my notes here incase anyone doesn't remember what this is about... I didn't actually write it for others to read but this series is quite something



Author is fucking BRAINDEAD fucking piece of shit how can he think the bad guys can get away with this nonsense piece of trash, fucking bad guy plot armor a single fucking smoke bomb and he escapes unscathed from a fucking dungeon when cornered! Apparently suggestion magic (brainwashing) is a known thing AND the way to dispel it, so why the fucking fuck can the top priestess of the church be EASILY controled by it for weeks!? Then escaped evil guy is captured AGAIN because he was STANDING AROUND WATCHING for no fucking reason.

MC Haru Traitor: Threw Leticia away after testing her reactions. Self worth issues. Takes lessens on self insight from a convicted murderer/torturer/mind maniuplator/city destroyer(including inhabitants) WHAT THE FUCK.
Main: {Leticia: Childhood friend. Became a hero to protect MC. In love?. Abusive arsehole. Hero (1of7). Lied to MC and made him think he's weak (author forcing plot to say it was to protect MC). Got beaten by MC. Did NOT learn from her mistakes. Turns out she's only an arsehole because a demon has been possessing her (not really only like half of her arseholeness can be explained by that).
Alice Spryte: Invited MC to party cuz former hero party. Kinda Saved. Secretly MC & Leticia's sick childhood friend. Had MCs memories erased cuz he was sad bullshit plot point.
Ange Autumn: Noble. Saintess candidate. Saved. Seems to have fallen for MC at first meeting.
Nine Synphonia: Combat/Head Maid. Saved. Supports Ange's love.
Sana: Ancient Dragon. Learned to be nice after being beaten. Decided to learn from MC. Human form.
}
Others: {Unnamed guild receptionist: Was a newbie when she registered MC & Leticia long ago.
Lona Falun: Orphan. Saintess candidate/Priestess. Ange's childhood friend. Jellous as fuck over Ange. Brainwashed SUPER EASILY to believe her best friend is her worst enemy by a random assassin. Saved.
Miliera Yurskul: Lord of Azrael city. Supposedly evil mastermind... Claims an evil assassin.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 8, 2023
Messages
4,072
Author is fucking BRAINDEAD fucking piece of shit how can he think the bad guys can get away with this nonsense piece of trash, fucking bad guy plot armor a single fucking smoke bomb and he escapes unscathed from a fucking dungeon when cornered! Apparently suggestion magic (brainwashing) is a known thing AND the way to dispel it, so why the fucking fuck can the top priestess of the church be EASILY controled by it for weeks!? Then escaped evil guy is captured AGAIN because he was STANDING AROUND WATCHING for no fucking reason.
Honestly that's how most betrayal series are, garbage level writing. Whats so annoying with the Leticia scenario is we know she wasn't a bad person until suddenly she started escalating getting worse and worse.

From the other chapter we now know she's possessed which means that the MC hates her unjustifiably (Although he doesn't know yet) but also means us as the reader now get to read 2 former essentally lovers have one of them gravitationg towards a new lover while the vicitm of possession is further victimised.

What makes this so bad is it's not going to have a good resolution, infact with the dense protag/harem context he'll robably end up with all the girls but Leticia. Such very bad writing.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 8, 2023
Messages
4,072
I hate when there's a new chapter to read and you have to re-read the whole thing over again because it's been so long you can't remember what happened in the series.
Or a series when it's not been too long but it's so generic it blends in with like 4 other series and again you have to reread it all just to remember who's who and how they interact lol
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 19, 2023
Messages
6,834
From the other chapter we now know she's possessed which means that the MC hates her unjustifiably (Although he doesn't know yet)
At this point Alice should figure out that there's a possible possession and work with MC to grill Leticia about it. But she's probably too afraid of him finding out who she is.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
May 25, 2023
Messages
1,367
Let's see, Miliera "Gonnabash" Yurskul is somehow related to our MC and the Hero, and will/is in love with him :facepalm:
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jun 21, 2023
Messages
362
I'm fine with Haru being oblivious to people crushing on him, with his whole abusive upbringing from his friend. What I don't like is them teasing abused child cause he doesn't realize someone likes him. Especially after he reacted to the Hero liking him...


I'm still gonna read tho cause I'm running out of manga
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top