A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal (Fan Colored) - Vol. 1 Ch. 52 - Class 2-E

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Finally, we reached the school.
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It was lot of work in these many chapters. Finally encountered chapter with many pages. Almost all of the pages was to be colored. :meguuusad:

I will take some break from coloring for few days.
 
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Finally, we reached the school.
qJuTlCZ.png


It was lot of work in these many chapters. Finally encountered chapter with many pages. Almost all of the pages was to be colored. :meguuusad:

I will take some break from coloring for few days.
They all appear later, hell Yuri has a bubble on page 1
 
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It was lot of work in these many chapters.
if you ever go over stuff again at some point, I noticed two small errors/typos you could fix.

P1:
"HEY, DID YOU HEARD? WE'RE GETTING..." -> correct would be either "did you hear" or "have you heard" here.
P3:
"THE PREVIOU BOY, YAMADA-KUN..." -> "S" missing from "PREVIOUS"

Also, for dialogues, I would stick to full capitalized text. You had some bubbles with normal text mixed in. They stick out in a weird way, at least to me. But that's just my preference when it comes to reading.
 
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if you ever go over stuff again at some point, I noticed two small errors/typos you could fix.

P1:
"HEY, DID YOU HEARD? WE'RE GETTING..." -> correct would be either "did you hear" or "have you heard" here.
P3:
"THE PREVIOU BOY, YAMADA-KUN..." -> "S" missing from "PREVIOUS"

Also, for dialogues, I would stick to full capitalized text. You had some bubbles with normal text mixed in. They stick out in a weird way, at least to me. But that's just my preference when it comes to reading.
I will correct them when I get my PC again. That chapter was quite tiring one, They had each page different, and was exhausted due to coloring props and things for chapter next and before. I totally overlooked the mistake.
 

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