A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal (Fan Colored) - Vol. 1 Ch. 68 - I arrived (came), Finally!

[MangaDex]

 

[Geako]

Kana is so shiny.



She Arrived (came) !!!

I looked kisaragi sensei's color work. I had mixed feeling that His color drawing is not having as much depth as like me. His color drawing has background colorless and character has missing layer of illumination.

I am not finding mistake, He can also do that but extra work is not needed for him. I just saying as artist where I work more. I feel like its's wrong for me making my art different from him, I also don't want to tone down.

For example, To make art more alive 'Depth' than flat, I look of falling lights as unseen character, reflection and other things. This is the illumination map on objects on in this current chapter, Also I think on color harmony with background a lot making sure that image good both zoom in and zoom out.

Normally, you will not notice these things, there are undetected layers there. You can notice metallic part of bench-chair shiny. I don't know how other people color and what correct method is, but this how I learned doing.

Other things, I have child-like tendency that I feel bad from online criticism. I saw few comment on this manga on Mangafire.to and I didn't liked the mean one. Overthinking is not good for me.

 

[Geako]

Kana satisfied face is as iconic as Miku's satisfied face, from the chapter 65. We couldn't see Hinata's face while being praised.

 

[dimox]

I have child-like tendency that I feel bad from online criticism. I saw few comment on this manga on Mangafire.to and I didn't liked the mean one. Overthinking is not good for me.

Well, criticism is some kind of art in itself. It needs both, the one giving their opinion and the one receiving it to be serious. As such, e.g. saying something like "I hate this shit" wouldn't be criticism but stating one's personal taste in a rude way and simply said it's a sign of bad manners. Not liking the original work is also a matter of taste and nothing you should take seriously. Proper criticism would be looking objectively at your part of the work, which is mainly coloring and when you do textless stuff then the redrawn parts.

As for that, so your work, I think it's fine.

You try to make something you personally enjoy available to an audience - in a form the original work doesn't provide (in this case coloring). That's similar to creating a doujinshi for an original work in that regard. It takes a lot of effort to do this in a way that pays proper respect to the original artist and their artwork.
What you are trying to do is make your part look like it was meant to be like this from the start. If there are errors (like missing a part when coloring) you fix them. If you got design templates from the original creator you follow them. When there are no color character designs (yet) you have to use your own imagination to fill that gap and do it in a way that matches the rest. There is no no 100% correct desgin to follow unless the original artist provides it. Period. Everytime you had to do it - at least what I saw - the result was fitting in nicely. Nothing that sticks out like a sore thumb, I have no complains there.
If, at some point, more character designs from Class E are officially revealed, you might want to adjust some of you colored versions with updated ones that match them. Maybe we see A-ko (Classmate A) or the girl sitting right next to Hinata officially revealed in color. Or some of the other yet unnamed characters we've been shown during class introduction and hug-fest.

All I can say is, you've done a good job so far and get better over time.

Thanks!

 

[Geako]

Well, criticism is some kind of art in itself. It needs both, the one giving their opinion and the one receiving it to be serious. As such, e.g. saying something like "I hate this shit" wouldn't be criticism but stating one's personal taste in a rude way and simply said it's a sign of bad manners. Not liking the original work is also a matter of taste and nothing you should take seriously. Proper criticism would be looking objectively at your part of the work, which is mainly coloring and when you do textless stuff then the redrawn parts.

As for that, so your work, I think it's fine.

You try to make something you personally enjoy available to an audience - in a form the original work doesn't provide (in this case coloring). That's similar to creating a doujinshi for an original work in that regard. It takes a lot of effort to do this in a way that pays proper respect to the original artist and their artwork.
What you are trying to do is make your part look like it was meant to be like this from the start. If there are errors (like missing a part when coloring) you fix them. If you got design templates from the original creator you follow them. When there are no color character designs (yet) you have to use your own imagination to fill that gap and do it in a way that matches the rest. There is no no 100% correct desgin to follow unless the original artist provides it. Period. Everytime you had to do it - at least what I saw - the result was fitting in nicely. Nothing that sticks out like a sore thumb, I have no complains there.
If, at some point, more character designs from Class E are officially revealed, you might want to adjust some of you colored versions with updated ones that match them. Maybe we see A-ko (Classmate A) or the girl sitting right next to Hinata officially revealed in color. Or some of the other yet unnamed characters we've been shown during class introduction and hug-fest.

All I can say is, you've done a good job so far and get better over time.

Thanks!

Thanks for encouragement.
I am eager to hear your comment about Kana which you were saving earlier.

 

[dimox]

I am eager to hear your comment about Kana which you were saving earlier.

That shall come, rest assured, but I have to go to work now :-/
Until then, and since Kanaria didn't receive enough praise...
If Sou won't do it, I will:

カナの髪、
光になびく
すてきなだ！

Savor my Kanaria Haiku
(I choose Katakana for Kanaria's pet name here, not sure if they use Hiragana かな)

 

[BKNY_STEVE]

The coloring is outstanding! Thank you!

 

[MrTurtleMan]

I always felt a bit sorry for Kana that she only got 1 compliment, especially after he went over for Hinata and the fact he already said she has beautiful hair, but the recent chapter made up for it so I'll give it a pass

 

[dimox]

I always felt a bit sorry for Kana that she only got 1 compliment

Miku got a poem and was complimented into masturbation mode.
Hinata exchanged praises with Sou and he also touched her.
And poor Kanaria got served a re-run, huh?

So you might think... but you should look closely at this chapter and some events that follow later.

But first things first - it's true that Kanaria likely expected more but it was her own fault for writing exactly what Sou would praise. Had she not done that, well... but look, she was still satisfied - her face on the last picture tells it all. Kanaria obtained something here, I already mentioned that earlier. Now, what would that be, you ask?

Simple: a "virtual holy relic"

Let me elaborate: unlike Miku or Hinata, Kanaria was clever enough to record Sou's voice when he praised her. She saved a compliment from him. Not only that, it's one where he used her pet name "Kana". Oh but he uses it all time, so isn't that just insignificant? Far from it:

A boy addressing a girl by name is extremely rare. What about her given name? Haha, good joke. Her pet name? What drugs are you smoking?! Okay, seriously, the norm in that world, even for female family members, is way different. Original Sou for example NEVER used the given names when interacting with his sisters. He addressed Sumire rudely with "hey" or "you"... Isekai Sou also uses Hinata's and Miku's given name, but for Kanaria it's her pet name. She got a record of her dream guy praising her with her pet name - you bet she will make this her lullaby, she said so herself.

Now here's the thing. Where did we see something similar? The scene happens later in the story, but Kaede Kakizaki does the same thing (recording her phone call with Sou). The stimulus of hearing his voice so close and using her given name turned Kaede into damaged goods. Kanaria in contrast remains sane - she's her usual (albeit rotten) self even after two days/nights were she used that recording to lull herself to sleep.

I'd argue this hardened Kanaria's mental firewall. Keep in mind, she saw from up close what happened to Miku and she is fully aware of how dangerous Sou's words and deeds are. She knows the effect from personal experience. That's also why she warns the ignorant Class A girls about it on Day 3 morning.

There's another notable thing - Kanaria herself mentioned that, unlike other girls, she is unable to create erotic fantasies to distract herself. It's a technique girls of Konoe Gakuen use all time. That said, Kanaria is forced to endure mental stress and keep her cool without delusions. Showing a calm outward appearance despite that while being a huge pervert on the inside? Yup, this girl's got her act together - her mask isn't perfect, though, she failed to fool Sumire.

And then there's another thing Kanaria gained from this event. She gets greedier and bolder. She wanted to be Sou's wife right from the start, but now she will do what's necessary to achieve this. I daresay it's to a point where she takes risks and grabs chances whenever they appear before her because she doesn't want to be outdone again. Of course she wouldn't openly confront her two friends, but other than that, anything is fine.

If you don't believe it, see the most recent event where she risked her dignity and wellbeing to get a taste of Sou's cooking. She tries to act before others can. What happened? It sends her into an alternate realm but since Kanaria is normally used to fight lust without delusions, she was able to recognize that world as fake. And then? Instead of just breaking free, what would be the normal reaction, she used that world like a lucid dream - just for her own enjoyment. And once she was satisfied, she broke out by her own will. Sasuga Kanaria.

This Ojou-sama may act rashly at times and she's still a bit awkward but she's a nevertheless a serious and crafty one who uses what she has at hand. During the home visit Kanaria agitated Sumire's hostility by calling her "Sister-In-Law" - this is Kana making it crystal clear that she considers Sou as her husband and herself a part of the Satou family... and when she reveals Sumire's "Violet" account and praises it openly, she mitigates Sumire's anger.

The other girls better watch out for this one.

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Sorry for wall of text.

 

[ipod123432]

The power of Kana of the sparking eyes is fearsome to behold. I'm glad that the latest chapters have given her further rewards for her initiative.

 

[Geako]

The power of Kana of the sparking eyes is fearsome to behold. I'm glad that the latest chapters have given her further rewards for her initiative.

Kana is mischievous, most proactive in her approach. Best legal wife candidate.
Not only she is ojou-sama, she is from rich family with leadership qualities.
Kisaragi Sensei has said new chapter before Wednesday, so finger crossed for looking at Kana.