A Parallel World with a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio is Unexpectedly Normal (Fan Colored) - Vol. 2 Ch. 105 - Momozono Yuri's Onee-sama

[MangaDex]

 

[Geako]

X-Class heroine entered the ship!!!

 

[Tardazor]

Time for Rewrite Yuri-chan sama

 

[MrTurtleMan]

You did the colour of the uniform different (aside from page 7 and 8), it looks more reddish (maroon?) whereas previously it was very much brown. At 1st I thought it might have been something like it was leeching her hair colour but Miku's uniform is the same colour on page 6, then I thought it might be because it's her fantasy then Yuri has the same colour page 11.

 

[furtadopires]

!!!!And The Main Character Appears!!!!

 

[dimox]

One day the Goddess watched a certain young girl who was trying her best to enter the school of her dreams. Well, it was not really her dream but she still gave it her all. The Goddess was pleased and decided that the girl should have a good life because effort has to be rewarded.

Goddess:
Let's see... a male for her? Now, this will take some time but WE shall see to it that your wish is granted, little peach.

The Goddess then searched for a nice man who would want the girl and found him at a distant place. It took a while to set things in motion, and when the Goddess went to watch the girl again she seemed rather unhappy. The girl had hoped to find a "man" who she could be with but what she met in school until then did not meet her expecations at all. Disappointed, the girl had come to detest "men" and looked at girls now. The Goddess was confused.

Goddess:
What shall WE do with this? It was so hard to find him, WE cannot just send him back, can WE? Well, it looks fun, WE'll have him come anyway. You just have to continue and give it your best, little peach. Rejoice, your husband is on his way. You might have to share, though.

And so, one day in Konoe Gakuen, a new male scholarship student joined.
The girl had no idea what was coming to her.
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[MarqFJA87]

@Geako I love how you reoriented the T and A in "about" on the last page so that they resemble the shape of an arrow pointing at "male". It's confusingly ingenious.

 

[Koruki]

Thanks for the tl!

 

[Geako]

I saw the newest fantia chapter released by Author. I was satisfied my drawing follows the exact style the author draws color illustrations. But those color chapters are never in Free Tier. You should feel lucky that you are enjoying premium work by me. Now, number of pages per chapter has increased. So, there will be fewer updates.

Time for Rewrite Yuri-chan sama

Comments on Nico Nico saying "Already broken" , "even without doing anything" Yuri had no idea how many times she will corrected in a day. She will get cuter and cuter with each correction.

You did the colour of the uniform different (aside from page 7 and 8), it looks more reddish (maroon?) whereas previously it was very much brown. At 1st I thought it might have been something like it was leeching her hair colour but Miku's uniform is the same colour on page 6, then I thought it might be because it's her fantasy then Yuri has the same colour page 11.

Yes, it changed. It was Miku's dreamy color, which got copied in other dresses. I corrected that Btw if you invert the page 9 you will see the following.

!!!!And The Main Character Appears!!!!

I made her more cuter than original, with the shading of hair. Shading of Yuri-chan's hair (along with other thing) changes as per chapters making her cuter with next. I tired to follow the shading of later chapters.
Also Middle school Yuri looked cute in Sailor Uniform. She wears same uniform as Sakura and Misaki.

One day the Goddess watched a certain young girl who was trying her best to enter the school of her dreams. Well, it was not really her dream but she still gave it her all. The Goddess was pleased and decided that the girl should have a good life because effort has to be rewarded.

Following advice or instruction was from Goddess year before She joined Konoe Gakuen.

If You Don't Have Any Dreams For The Future, Why Don't You Join Konoe Gakuen!?
Male Guards Earn A Lot Of Money!
Moreover, You'll Meet "Men" There! You Should Definitely Try It!

Don't Spend Your Days Of Youth Gray Without Meeting Any Men, Like Your Mother Did!

@Geako I love how you reoriented the T and A in "about" on the last page so that they resemble the shape of an arrow pointing at "male". It's confusingly ingenious.

Yup, I reminded me of 'Death Note' logo. Like a dagger pointed to target.

Thanks for the tl!

Thanks for encouragement. I get only few comments for the hard work I do on each chapter. But I am happy to get each one.

 

[ipod123432]

Yuri chan sama has arrived! Even in her debut she has the best expression

 

[Geako]

Yuri chan sama has arrived! Even in her debut she has the best expression

Her Lost and frustrated face is cute. Lol, she is more angry on why MC is dense.

"At least recognize her Maiden Heart"
"Does this guy know what he is doing?"
"NO!! As I thought he doesn't notice..."

 

[dimox]

Following advice or instruction was from Goddess year before She joined Konoe Gakuen.

Mhh, yep. But let me explain my prior post a bit since maybe not everyone gets it right away.

That Goddess stuff is obviously not canonical. It's essentially a "what if" set between what's shown in this chapter (Yuri's mama telling her middle school daughter to join Konoe Gakuen) and a moment shortly before Sou came to school.

I thought what if Yuri was an actual Otoge Protagonist (we know the author likes her)... then Sou arriving in this world with the help of the Goddess would be so that he could meet Yuri who was looking for a man.

Yuri said herself that even though she was not fully convinced in the beginning, she still did her best to enter Konoe Academy. The Goddess liked that when she saw it by pure chance. That's why the Goddess said she'd grant little peach's wish as a reward for all her efforts - as we know Momozono means "peach orchard", hence the Goddess calls Yuri "Little Peach".

The Goddess had seen Yuri before she actually enrolled and wanted to make it so that Yuri actually would find a guy there. As a result she looked for a fitting man, only to notice that Yuri's future Darling wasn't even living in the 1:39 world. That's why it took considerable time for the Goddess to bring him over. Obviously she has also other tasks to do, so she couldn't keep track of Yuri all the time. There are lots of humans to watch over...

Then, finally, everything was set in motion. Sou was just about to enter the Academy and the Goddess looked at Yuri's life again, but to her shock Yuri had already lost all hope because the guys at school until then were dumb, pathetic jerks. Yuri had become interested in Miku instead, which confused the Goddess as to how she should handle this. But after she looked at the situation as a whole, the Goddess thought it would be funny to bring Sou in anyways - thus, here we are in the present.

TLDR: Yuri, be careful what you wish for.

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I really like how you went over Yuri. Especially funny is how Yuri looks even more devastated and broken on the second last page of this chapter than she did after actually getting broken first time