A Rogue Guard in a Medieval Fantasy - Ch. 28

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Are the genders being left intentionally vague or is this a proof reading thing. The inquisitor is that a woman or man, the abbot called her a woman, but MC keeps saying he/him. At the end there too the new lady called the hooded person little sister, but I’m pretty sure it’s just a bald man.
 
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Are the genders being left intentionally vague or is this a proof reading thing. The inquisitor is that a woman or man, the abbot called her a woman, but MC keeps saying he/him. At the end there too the new lady called the hooded person little sister, but I’m pretty sure it’s just a bald man.
Shit translations. They even called the church a synagogue last chapter.
 
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What is even going on anymore? What's the point of the MC being reincarnated? Didn't the mc have a past before becoming the guard captain? What happened to the woman in his dreams in the first chapter? What about the fucking demon thats attached to him? There is no plot whatsoever it seems like the author is just throwing a bunch of random ideas at the wall and doesn't know what to do with them.
 
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What is even going on anymore? What's the point of the MC being reincarnated? Didn't the mc have a past before becoming the guard captain? What happened to the woman in his dreams in the first chapter? What about the fucking demon thats attached to him? There is no plot whatsoever it seems like the author is just throwing a bunch of random ideas at the wall and doesn't know what to do with them.
I see this more of a "slice of life" writing with action fantasy. The author skipping the mc's past and the mc just being a guard captain make me think so. Currently, the main plot is the dark mages really want the girl loved by mana.

I think this is much better than bad plot writing.
 

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