A Song of Singing - Ch. 2 - That's Certainly a Lovely Thing

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the pacing of the story feels a bit clunky? weird? Idk it just doesn't flow smoothly somehow. But overall, it's still understandable and I enjoy the story, so I'm gonna follow this.

thanks for picking this up!!
 
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?? did she cast a love spell on her or something
I feel she just wanted to express her feelings and ended up causing way more than that. Her parents were talking about her losing control of her magic for a reason.
 

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