A Story About Making a Blood Pact with My Childhood Friend - Ch. 1

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I think that is should probably "My name" and not "Thy name". She wouldn't be calling the boy "princess".
 
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Fun premise, but the fact that this is one of those single-page oneshots is a pretty disappointing. You don't even see the guy's face in this chapter, so how much characterization is he even going to get? Authors that don't realize how important the protagonist / perspective character is usually end up making pretty low-quality stories.
 
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