A Wife Who Heals with Tights - Ch. 14
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Even I, the reader, am healed by this chapter (and manga, by extension).
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Fuck now i want to have a wife now
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Just a quick tip since I saw the last page:
honorifics should go on a new line if its cramped:
tai-
to-san
to
taito
-san
anyway, thanks for therather questionable translation!
honorifics should go on a new line if its cramped:
tai-
to-san
to
taito
-san
anyway, thanks for the
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How sad. This kind of girl only exist in a fiction
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@piracyknight However, men and women exploited by shady companies exist in RL by the millions.
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If you want feedback, I'll just echo what potatofood said as the most egregious mistake that keeps appearing (except do not put the hyphen on the second line as "-san", that's not how hyphens work), and to be perfectly honest I'd say there doesn't seem to be a whole lot of thought put into the typesetting in general.
Stuff like
Don't just copypaste the text into the speech bubble and call it done, actually consider how it reads. Avoid having punctuation in the middle of a line. Avoid unnecessary hyphenation.
Try to keep font sizes consistent (within like +-1~2pt) rather than vary them based on how much room there is in the speech bubble.
Use proper punctuation. Avoid doubling !! and ?? because that looks like something teenagers write in text messages (!? is fine).
Center the text in the bubble, both horizontally and vertically. Don't just eyeball it, I'm seeing a consistent pattern of the text being too high and too much to the left.
Translate and properly typeset sfx even if you don't feel like completely redrawing them.
And so on
Stuff like
is incredibly difficult to parse. What's nn, ur, see...? Oh, that means nurse. You guys know that the e in nurse is silent, right. "Nuuurse", not "nurseee".
Don't just copypaste the text into the speech bubble and call it done, actually consider how it reads. Avoid having punctuation in the middle of a line. Avoid unnecessary hyphenation.
Try to keep font sizes consistent (within like +-1~2pt) rather than vary them based on how much room there is in the speech bubble.
Use proper punctuation. Avoid doubling !! and ?? because that looks like something teenagers write in text messages (!? is fine).
Center the text in the bubble, both horizontally and vertically. Don't just eyeball it, I'm seeing a consistent pattern of the text being too high and too much to the left.
Translate and properly typeset sfx even if you don't feel like completely redrawing them.
And so on
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@Teasday and @potatofood Thank you guys so much for the tips, and i will try my best to use those tips in our upcoming chapters with the upmost care!
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you ever stop and wonder how many pairs of tights she has?
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Indeed you are
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Looks like Emilia got isekai'd.
