These are fun, and I like the set-up of this being possibilities that come from the main timeline, but it would have been cool if all of these possibilities sprouted from a singular mission, rather than just randomly happening.
Also, I wish more of these possibilities were either "okay endings" or even "Good Endings", the vast majority of them are "Bad Endings" - such as her being raped by dogs, or being raped by goblins, or being raped by goblins and unknowingly impregnated.
So it'd be nice if we could have had more like ch.4, 12, 13, 14 and 16, which are the "okay (not so bad) endings", and we could have had some where she just has romantic times with a party member, or falls in love with a villager, or the demon king is a hottie and they seduce each other; Not everything has to be so grim.
Also, she's supposed to be a high level adventurer, but gets caught out by rando hoodlums in an alley?... What?
Anyway, I'm reviewing porn right now, which is cringe, so I'll leave it here.