Ah... and Mm... Are All She Says - Vol. 4 Ch. 24 - Useless

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The narration boxes on pgs 27-28 really rub me the wrong way. An interesting and complex conflict, set up for multiple chapters, resolved in a few pages without any sort of back and forth. I've really, really, really enjoyed this story so far, far more than I expected to, and this just feels intensely disappointing.
 

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