Ake no Tobari - Ch. 148 - Within My Arms (16)

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I had a lot of trouble distinguishing flashback from the current fight tbh
 
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upon reading this chapter, the 1st thought that came to my mind is: bah what BS...

this was far too long , and with the flashback and the ending of the battle its just not satisfying. im kinda very annoyed, not only with the outcome but the whole situation and the monk had no part in this.. except for the flower part.
and his body breaks too easily..
 
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Shoving the whole flashback in was bad narrative technique, but other than that section, I enjoyed this.

Just wish that other guy had been treated as more than a speed bump.
 

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