Akuyaku Reijou no Mamahaha ni Tensei Shita node Musume o Shiawase ni Shimasu, Chikarazuku de. THE COMIC - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I think it's probably a mistake to imply Selene previously lived a full life as this sets a level of expectation I'm unsure the author can fulfill. This is an adaptation so it's source should be a web novel. Generally this means they don't stray far from the source. Web novel writers have largely shown that they cannot convincing write a 20 year old, cannot convincingly write a 30 year old, cannot convincingly write a 40 year old, and cannot convincingly write a 50 year old. All end up being written as if they are 14. It is unlikely they can write someone that lived to an old age and died of natural causes.

That said this has a promising start with the disposition Selene has shown so far.
Adults aren't nearly as mature as you seem to be thinking they are or something.
 
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when she said scars i was like oh it cant be that bad but no like damn thats bad. still how funny the scars from a bear she fought off since this lady is about to become a MAMA bear herself LMAO
I appreciate so much that they went full disfigurement with the scars instead of the light touches you usually see in a lot of manga/anime. And her pride over her survival is just the best!!
 
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I think it's probably a mistake to imply Selene previously lived a full life as this sets a level of expectation I'm unsure the author can fulfill. This is an adaptation so it's source should be a web novel. Generally this means they don't stray far from the source. Web novel writers have largely shown that they cannot convincing write a 20 year old, cannot convincingly write a 30 year old, cannot convincingly write a 40 year old, and cannot convincingly write a 50 year old. All end up being written as if they are 14. It is unlikely they can write someone that lived to an old age and died of natural causes.

That said this has a promising start with the disposition Selene has shown so far.
I was thinking more that she's got too many elements to her backstory.

I think the main thing is that , "I isekai'd into an otome game after struggling with infertility," and, "I got attacked by a bear and it led to my first divorce" are sorta mutually exclusive?

If the bear thing happens after you already got isekai'd it feels less like a freak accident and more like you're being fucked with on a cosmic level.
 

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