Akuyaku Reijou wa Isekai Tensei Shite mo Otome Game wo Tsukuritai! Otome Shumi wo Kakushite ita ore ga Doushite Makikomarete iru nodarou? - Vol. 1 Ch…

[MangaDex]

 

[halcer]

surprisingly, she has a pretty good relationship with her brother

 

[Ann2004]

Is it just me or does the writing seem a bit... bad? It seems to be forced a bit too much.

Like, when they're introducing the characters cast, they could have done it in a more natural way, but no, the female lead goes and seeks out the characters, one by one, for literally no reason at all.

I know the premise is basic but still, try a little harder.

 

[Ovnidemon]

It seems the translation is quite bad? I felt like there were missing pages or in the wrong order. Also the pages size are not constant: most page are quite small and you can't zoom it, but others had a big size

 

[Basic_human]

Wow... These scenarios so boring and cliche