Alice-tachi no Hyouhon - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - File 1

[MangaDex]

 

[Turkeyjerkey]

Messy and amateurish, but sincere. I like it.

 

[Nyquill]

Messy and amateurish, but sincere. I like it.

omg... this is my first ever comment! ill take it as motivation to do better next time. It def is amateurish (I am an amateur at this stuff after all lolol) But I'm glad you at least liked it! For future chapters is there anything different you would like to see?I wanna improve

 

[Turkeyjerkey]

omg... this is my first ever comment! ill take it as motivation to do better next time. It def is amateurish (I am an amateur at this stuff after all lolol) But I'm glad you at least liked it! For future chapters is there anything different you would like to see?I wanna improve

I meant the manga. The scanlation's great haha! Thanks for your efforts.

 

[EchoGirl]

Alice sure is a popular fairy tale inspo

The dream tech seems like something outs a movie but memory sorting aside, I think enough weird things happen in “dreams” to make it hard to use it as like proof in court

Wait is this not the plot of AI Somnium Files

 

[Regular_user2]

Thanks for the chapter! Looks good, but I caught a mistake in page 17. "It was a gamble to see if the boy still any ability had to think normally" should have been "It was a gamble to see if the boy still had any ability to think normally".

I thought at first that this would be like the Minority Report and Psycho Pass, but seems like it's before the system is really implemented and they only act after crimes, for now at least.

I wonder if they'll explore a bit the issues with using information from people's dreams to judge them or if it'll be just adventures in dream worlds.