An Exiled Blacksmith Uses His Cheat Skills to Forge Legends

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It's garbage level of writing, the guy can even restore missing limbs with hammer as part of "repair" skill, heal random illness or even build houses with single tap... there's no problems to overcome, just smooth ride after his brother kicked him out and stole his fiance, even all the girls are 100% upgrade from his former wife-to-be.

Anyway it has alright level of art (some panels looks even good, depends of each drawing) and it's basically lowkey battleharem with a lot of different girls, fanservice and comedy based on "HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!".
 
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It's garbage level of writing, the guy can even restore missing limbs with hammer as part of "repair" skill, heal random illness or even build houses with single tap... there's no problems to overcome, just smooth ride after his brother kicked him out and stole his fiance, even all the girls are 100% upgrade from his former wife-to-be.

Anyway it has alright level of art (some panels looks even good, depends of each drawing) and it's basically lowkey battleharem with a lot of different girls, fanservice and comedy based on "HOW DID YOU DO THAT?!".
Can you give spoilers about what happens to the former wife-to-be and his brother? Because that's the only interesting part we got from chapter 1
 
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Can you give spoilers about what happens to the former wife-to-be and his brother? Because that's the only interesting part we got from chapter 1
Fiance will acknowledge her mistake later, once the other dude will fuck up order from important figures (he used some kind of enchantment cheat on gear, to make it look better) and will leave him. The business will crash and that's about it. Yeah, the redemption arc sucks also.
 
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To save everyone the time and frustration of reading this mess, here’s the basic spoiler of this garbage story:

the protagonist’s ex-fiancée suddenly announces that she’s been cheating on him with his younger brother—right after he finishes saving the company and building a house for the two of them. She then takes everything he built and marries the younger brother.
Back in chapter 1, the ex-fiancée accuses the protagonist of caring more about his work than about her. First of all—seriously, screw you. He was out there saving your company and running his own shop. And let’s not forget—it was you who pushed him down this path in the first place. She exploited his OP abilities and set this ridiculous condition: “100 A-rank weapons in a day, and 9,999 in a month.” Like, are you out of your damn mind? With that kind of workload, who the hell has time to “focus on the relationship”?
The protagonist, pissed off, decides to leave the two traitors behind and moves abroad. Not long after, the company collapses because it relied entirely on the unique products he used to craft and supply. The younger brother, now desperate, accepts a cursed seal that disguises low-level gear as A-rank weapons. But customers aren’t idiots—one test and they know it’s a scam. The company’s reputation tanks and it goes bankrupt. The ex-fiancée, finally realizing her mistake, decides to go overseas to find the protagonist and beg for forgiveness.
She shows up crying, saying she still loves him and that everything before was just a mistake. Unexpectedly, the protagonist coldly rejects her and kicks her out. As a last resort, she pulls the “I’m pregnant with your brother’s child, please help me raise him” card. The protagonist, out of pity, gives her a round-trip ticket home—nothing more. If the story had ended there, I’d have no complaints. But of course, it doesn’t. Now onto the younger brother—after going insane from guilt, jealousy, and realizing he’s a talentless parasite who stole his brother’s fiancée, he loses it. The cursed seal turns him into a monster who ends up destroying the very country he lives in. The protagonist has to return to fix everything.
The crazy little brother, seeing this, decides to kill him. The protagonist defeats him and revives everything the idiot destroyed. In the end, the younger brother is thrown into prison awaiting execution. But somehow, the protagonist, being a literal saint, begs the king to spare his life and has him and the ex-fiancée exiled instead. And the cherry on top? The protagonist keeps supplying goods to them so they can survive financially. Like, seriously? After all the betrayal, attempted murder, and stupidity, he chooses to forgive them and support them. If there had been an actual character arc showing how he reached this level of “forgive and forget,” fine. But nope—the author pulls this “family first” ending straight out of nowhere, slaps it on, and calls it a day."

So yeah, this story is absolute trash. Don’t waste your time reading it.
 
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To save everyone the time and frustration of reading this mess, here’s the basic spoiler of this garbage story:

the protagonist’s ex-fiancée suddenly announces that she’s been cheating on him with his younger brother—right after he finishes saving the company and building a house for the two of them. She then takes everything he built and marries the younger brother.
Back in chapter 1, the ex-fiancée accuses the protagonist of caring more about his work than about her. First of all—seriously, screw you. He was out there saving your company and running his own shop. And let’s not forget—it was you who pushed him down this path in the first place. She exploited his OP abilities and set this ridiculous condition: “100 A-rank weapons in a day, and 9,999 in a month.” Like, are you out of your damn mind? With that kind of workload, who the hell has time to “focus on the relationship”?
The protagonist, pissed off, decides to leave the two traitors behind and moves abroad. Not long after, the company collapses because it relied entirely on the unique products he used to craft and supply. The younger brother, now desperate, accepts a cursed seal that disguises low-level gear as A-rank weapons. But customers aren’t idiots—one test and they know it’s a scam. The company’s reputation tanks and it goes bankrupt. The ex-fiancée, finally realizing her mistake, decides to go overseas to find the protagonist and beg for forgiveness.
She shows up crying, saying she still loves him and that everything before was just a mistake. Unexpectedly, the protagonist coldly rejects her and kicks her out. As a last resort, she pulls the “I’m pregnant with your brother’s child, please help me raise him” card. The protagonist, out of pity, gives her a round-trip ticket home—nothing more. If the story had ended there, I’d have no complaints. But of course, it doesn’t. Now onto the younger brother—after going insane from guilt, jealousy, and realizing he’s a talentless parasite who stole his brother’s fiancée, he loses it. The cursed seal turns him into a monster who ends up destroying the very country he lives in. The protagonist has to return to fix everything.
The crazy little brother, seeing this, decides to kill him. The protagonist defeats him and revives everything the idiot destroyed. In the end, the younger brother is thrown into prison awaiting execution. But somehow, the protagonist, being a literal saint, begs the king to spare his life and has him and the ex-fiancée exiled instead. And the cherry on top? The protagonist keeps supplying goods to them so they can survive financially. Like, seriously? After all the betrayal, attempted murder, and stupidity, he chooses to forgive them and support them. If there had been an actual character arc showing how he reached this level of “forgive and forget,” fine. But nope—the author pulls this “family first” ending straight out of nowhere, slaps it on, and calls it a day."

So yeah, this story is absolute trash. Don’t waste your time reading it.
Thank you my friend. The protagonists being in that "forgive instead of hate" bullshit is how I'm gonna die from a stroke one day.
 
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how did the author manage to write "ShE iS cArRyInG mY cHiLd" and think to themselves "yea, that's gonna make a great story". like, no. wtf man.
Art is barely any better imo. It's only correct in the sense that the proportion of the characters doesn't look out of place and FOV is accurate. Inconsistency of the art means you'll never get used to the artstyle and as a result will feel much less immersive than even a bad but consistent art.
Also, why the fk does the fiancee (ex-fiancee I guess) looks like she's getting threatened and harassed precisely when she's declaring that she found true love. At least draw her expression properly. shit looks disturbing.
There is quite literally no coherence, nor consistency whatsoever, whether it is the quality of art, the story, or the logic behind abilities and decisions.
It's just a jumbled mess.
 

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