Yeah I agree, the pre-serialization just had more heat to it but the pacing might get better once the author crosses where the pre-serialization left off.
Yeah this is... concerning. Some age-gap stories manage to make it work by writing with a deft hand, mindful to how fucked up the subject matter can easily be, but this is sending up red flags that it's the sleazy kind.
Yeah this is... concerning. Some age-gap stories manage to make it work by writing with a deft hand, mindful to how fucked up the subject matter can easily be, but this is sending up red flags that it's the sleazy kind.
In the pre-serialized version, it's more apparent that the aunt is not okay with it at all but is giving into temptation while the niece is being seductive while this clearly being her first time and her basically pouncing on the first woman she's gotten the opportunity to. I feel like this one has rushed it compared to that version where it's a lot more self-aware.