I really don't think it's all that weird. I'm not sure why there's so many comments just saying "weird." I've only read on chapter, but seems to have a thought out plot and it seems like it'll be really interesting and good
With the way the plot and events are playing out, the story honestly reminds me of an RPG horror game. If anything, it almost reads like it was meant to be a game first.
Examples would be from Angeles finding those matches and to then use them on a random lamp in a dark room to the antagonistic gundog people who cause 'chase scenes'
The room placements are something very game like too. (Like the 'bar' and all of the 'random' dark rooms/halls they end up in after the thorn trap)
The story resembles games like angels of death, mad father, the witch's house, and Ib (to name a few)
I like it quite a bit and am interested in seeing where everything goes