Animal Human - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

[goodhunter]

Eh ... the ending is quite disappointing. It's basically just another story of the elite preying on everyone beneath them, that's basically it. There was really no point of there being animal humans and regular humans with an ending like this. The same story could have been told with just purely humans, or just purely animal humans. It started out interesting, and made you curious to see more about the animal humans, and how the relationship between humans and animals humans will be further into the story, and the possible dynamics, but it all just became pointless when it turned out to be "actually, the government knew all about this and were the ones controlling everything hur dur." Such an overdone story plot with no creativity that ruined a good story.

Also, how the fuck did the Bobcat dude die just like that? He pulled off crazy shit killing all the other animals, including the damn bear. Now all of a sudden, he just gets cooked by a deer human, absolutely no diffed? And why did he abandon the gun? Dude could have just shot him, instead he abandoned all reasoning and just jumped at him and got cooked lmfao

 

[tseeker]

Was a good read but as many have already said, this chapter did feel forced/poor/rushed. The eerie mystery and darkness of the setting was the appeal, so with that gone I can't really see where it would go from here and still remain interesting. I think this should've been the ending, although a bit tweaked