Are You a Villange Person? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Secret

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shut up and put the maid dress on already blud, no one cares about your teenage angst
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page 4

yesterday she wore

Before she wore

But to not repeat it will be better to use
before that, it was

i've
never seen

she had already worked


page 5
she is / she's

all the boys would turn

she's keeping
(happening right now and from now on)
she keeps (happening every time, more generally and not at a fixed time)
A guy asks something a girl

The girl doesn't tell the truth / dodges question
She's keeping this a secret from him
———————————————
-Dude I'm telling you, she doesn't want to tell me, she keeps it a
secret

Sry. I had to because it was a bit hart to read. The rest was fine imho. If you disagree or find somewhere I'm wrong pls point it out to me ;)
 
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page 4

yesterday she wore

Before she wore

But to not repeat it will be better to use
before that, it was

i've
never seen

she had already worked


page 5
she is / she's

all the boys would turn

she's keeping
(happening right now and from now on)
she keeps (happening every time, more generally and not at a fixed time)
A guy asks something a girl

The girl doesn't tell the truth / dodges question
She's keeping this a secret from him
———————————————
-Dude I'm telling you, she doesn't want to tell me, she keeps it a
secret

Sry. I had to because it was a bit hart to read. The rest was fine imho. If you disagree or find somewhere I'm wrong pls point it out to me ;)
Oh nice a correction, I always appreciate these don't worry, thanks btw
 
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page 4

yesterday she wore

Before she wore

But to not repeat it will be better to use
before that, it was

i've
never seen

she had already worked


page 5
she is / she's

all the boys would turn

she's keeping
(happening right now and from now on)
she keeps (happening every time, more generally and not at a fixed time)
A guy asks something a girl

The girl doesn't tell the truth / dodges question
She's keeping this a secret from him
———————————————
-Dude I'm telling you, she doesn't want to tell me, she keeps it a
secret

Sry. I had to because it was a bit hart to read. The rest was fine imho. If you disagree or find somewhere I'm wrong pls point it out to me ;)
thanks for the correction :)
 

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