Intentaré traducir al español, pero mi nivel en el idioma es básico, así que pido disculpas de antemano por cualquier error. <3no entendí una chota pero gracias por la tradu <3
Is... is this the whole thing? Only four pages? It feels incomplete.
It gave me the impression of being a farewell. The person and she were in hell and the person can go to heaven.This was random and felt pointless.
OK, but who was she talking to in the first page? Why was she falling to her death? Why was her body turning all spidery? This feels less like a complete oneshot and more like the last few pages of a 50-page oneshot.It gave me the impression of being a farewell. The person and she were in hell and the person can go to heaven.
That was only it, but in case the author releases anything else, I'll try to bring it to us.
OK, but who was she talking to in the first page? Why was she falling to her death? Why was her body turning all spidery? This feels less like a complete oneshot and more like the last few pages of a 50-page oneshot.
What?
Is this related to something else that would give the rest of this some context?
If you look at the falling person's head, she has the same hair and hairpieces. So, I think all pages are the same character. It really does feel like a fragment, or possibly vent art.I'm not sure, but it seems to me that the spider-like being is the person to whom the person from the following pages dedicates the possible "monologue" of the whole story. If I'm correct, the spider-like being didn't say anything throughout the whole story. The first page was a speech to her (to spider, not from spider), and the subsequents pages were the thoughts of the other person who saw her fall.
You have a point!If you look at the falling person's head, she has the same hair and hairpieces. So, I think all pages are the same character. It really does feel like a fragment, or possibly vent art.
no lo digo porque no pueda leer inglés, sino porque el one-shot es muy confusoIntentaré traducir al español, pero mi nivel en el idioma es básico, así que pido disculpas de antemano por cualquier error. <3
[Page 01]no lo digo porque no pueda leer inglés, sino porque el one-shot es muy confuso
anyway, si necesitas PR para la tradu al español, puedo ayudar