Holy SHIT that was something.
I honestly didn't even notice the tragedy tag at all which made this a lot better. And yes, I did indeed say better, and why? Because I genuinely think this was a pretty good read. I'd rate this a 8/10, but out of spite I'm going to rate it a 9. I get why people would rate it lower (I mean just look at the tags) but a 5.7 for a solid tragedy oneshot is honestly pretty unfair. It's short and it makes me feels the sads, so why unfair rating?