At That Time, the Battle Began

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Okay, I’ll be the first to say it.

The ending felt like it made the story inconsequential. 8-9/10 Drama/Comedy through-out… but that ending makes all of the story pointless. It makes it go from a 9/10… down to a brutal 6/10. Horrible lazy ending plot twist. Really solid tension builders through out the main story.
 
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still a fun read, a few twists, ending is one too that I didn't expect. Some girls didn't really matter though and had no point. Pretty funny
 
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The premise is interesting, but the author lacks the talent to create interesting interpersonal drama within it, and fully use the characters he introduces. The rushed ending doesn't bother me because it about fits in the general feel of mediocrity.
 
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The author is really sucks at writing, its like seeing a 6th grader make a story, where the story and plot didnt connected with each other and being forced to connected. But okay that was hillarious and such an interesting premise. It would be really hillarious if the ending shown their child saying "Mom, who's that black haired girl (referring to fake Alice Kitagawa) ?"
 

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