Attacking the Girls' Dormitory of the Demon King - Vol. 10 Ch. 91 - Birthday

[MangaDex]

 

[RandoTransGirl]

I hope none of you are interested in Lilith or any of the losses plot threads really because this chapter is the last you'll see of them and very little will get resolved in the next chapter. I'll wait for you all to see what gets resolved, but just know that the ending is very obviously rushed and will probably be at least somewhat unsatisfying for most.

Tbh this manhua was always at its best when it focused on isolated cute moments between Lisa and Marcia, and it probably might have been better well received if it didn't even attempt to have a plot. But I can respect the author for sticking to what they wanted for this long (Even if it feels like they accidentally mixed 5 novel plots together and couldn't figure out how to separate and focus on one.)

I have more opinions on what would have made this story better but I'll save them for the final chapter.

 

[dekuscrubs]

I hope none of you are interested in Lilith or any of the losses plot threads really because this chapter is the last you'll see of them and very little will get resolved in the next chapter. I'll wait for you all to see what gets resolved, but just know that the ending is very obviously rushed and will probably be at least somewhat unsatisfying for most.

I would weirdly be disappointed if that wasn't the case.

 

[mangaburner1979]

I personally liked the manhua's attempts at having a plot, the chaotic ride has been incredible. Messy yes, but it made the story unique. I just wish it went on for 200 chapters.

 

[NinjaGoemon]

I hope none of you are interested in Lilith or any of the losses plot threads really because this chapter is the last you'll see of them and very little will get resolved in the next chapter. I'll wait for you all to see what gets resolved, but just know that the ending is very obviously rushed and will probably be at least somewhat unsatisfying for most.

Tbh this manhua was always at its best when it focused on isolated cute moments between Lisa and Marcia, and it probably might have been better well received if it didn't even attempt to have a plot. But I can respect the author for sticking to what they wanted for this long (Even if it feels like they accidentally mixed 5 novel plots together and couldn't figure out how to separate and focus on one.)

I have more opinions on what would have made this story better but I'll save them for the final chapter.

I feel like the author could've done better setting up this plot point if it was done 50 chapters ago and not constantly having the system go "do X or i kill everything". Like ILTV has a big twist set up in vol 5 but spents the entire 2nd arc putting bits and pieces in the background without overpowering the narrative. Needed to do something more like that. Marcia felt like she was railroaded by an overbearing dm (which apparently it was) but there was no hints to that.

 

[Andigo]

I'm going to remember this story for how loosely planned and veering it is, sweet moments in a distant second. The jumpiness in the reality switches may be the epitome of exploratory style writing without the writer having steady attention or confidence to keep multiple plates spinning. Loose plans blur into new loose plans. That's not always an issue but it does not mesh well with stakes, and it gets glaring with magic systems since they let fresher or inattentive authors handwave anything.

I got confused over how Lilith just happened to look a bit like Lillian's childhood, not adulthood who was drawn later, but the Lils are no more connected or deep than any other secondary characters. Whether there was something there or it was creative repetition, I shouldn't have expected something. Nothing is very important here, why should coincidences be.

There's enough quality for near a hundred chapters, sure, but I really hope the creators started planning more for any future works.

 

[Pathro640808]

I feel like the author could've done better setting up this plot point if it was done 50 chapters ago and not constantly having the system go "do X or i kill everything". Like ILTV has a big twist set up in vol 5 but spents the entire 2nd arc putting bits and pieces in the background without overpowering the narrative. Needed to do something more like that. Marcia felt like she was railroaded by an overbearing dm (which apparently it was) but there was no hints to that.

ILTV is GOATED