Awakening the Purple Thunder at the Beginning - Ch. 2 - Martial Arts Hall Turbulence

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If someone didn't tell you to use the testing equipment against your warnings, you break it you bought it.

The superpower system is also poorly explained. Feels like word salad for, "I'm amazing now!"

Seem the writing in this one is of lower quality.
 
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If someone didn't tell you to use the testing equipment against your warnings, you break it you bought it.

The superpower system is also poorly explained. Feels like word salad for, "I'm amazing now!"

Seem the writing in this one is of lower quality.
What did you expect? From the first chapter it looked like these poor written stories where the mc is weak and then becomes strong
 

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