Azur Lane the Animation: Vacation - Vol. 4 Ch. 28 - Leader and Big Sis, Part 1

[MangaDex]

 

[phil777]

1st page mistake. "This was a great way to further unite all our the different camps!" Pick one. Not both.
Page 13. "You seem to at least be curiosity about my feelings..." Don't you mean curious?
Also on page 18, "maybe" in this context should be split into may and be. Or you could replace it with "might be".

 

[GroveofDryads]

Thanks for that I fix it now. Thanks!

 

[AncientWatcher]

I get there's an annoyed bear in that cave, but ladies, hear me out. You ARE military grade firepower. You got guns. Figure it out.