On page 7 the line on the bottom left panel is just awful. It would be better as "A fool who only looks at the chances of winning before the fight will just lose and die." Who the hell is proofreading this? My head started hurting parsing that gibberish.
It's what you get when you advertise that you'll pay money for (shitty) translators, but want proofreaders to work for free. Surprise, nobody wants to work for free to fix someone else's half-assed paid work!