Bannou Skill no Rettou Seijo Kiyosugiru no de Binbou ni wa Narimasendeshita - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[NinjaGoemon]

Remember to appreciate your healers they decide if you live or die.

At least she's got yuri now.

 

[carlisert]

Honestly this seem cool

 

[Maverun]

It kinda felt like rush, prob trying to get to the point, let see how it goes, I hope it is Yuri

 

[LogicalFairy]

Looks like fun! Thank you for the chapter

 

[Krune]

Thank you for the chapter, just two gals being new pals. Hopefully Lumia uses her position to both put a ring on that finger as well as establish solid couple goals. Soana should hopefully be able to flourish having someone who appreciates her and is rooting for her essentially serving as her hype man and work filter.

 

[Hyacyon]

Omg that credit page was a gif???????? Lmaooooo

also yeah, this seemed super rushed for a first chapter but premise seems kinda cute. Hope it’s more SOL

 

[GoldenGummy]

Please let this not lose its Girl's Love tag

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Honestly... not the worst reason ive seen for wanting someone out of the party...

Its better than sexism at least. They were assholes about it for sure, but honestly? Could be worse, firing for not living up to expectations isnt too uncommon, prolly couldve gone about it more gracefully though.

 

[pandatime]

yeah Dead ass if i was that Guild amster too i would be losing my shit if the Hero party fucking kicked out A saint.
Like thats something where your like uuuh is this ok...? but also FREE ADVERTISEMENT WOOO

 

[KeraFury]

happy to go from "planning to read" to "reading"

 

[Antinomy]

So, hero party gonna suffer without her? Or is replacement gonna be only slightly better than her?
Imma guess she was doing all the side stuff for them as well.

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Thanks for the TL

 

[D0ncoming5torm]

Aaaand another coin for the "I thought it looked good but turns out it's GL trash" jar. Getting pretty full.

 

[jrocker]

Given her surprise at the thought of being paid a Million and knowing her party made 1 Billion she either has not concept of money or she got paid almost nothing of that money.

 

[Orangechrisy]

It kinda felt like rush, prob trying to get to the point, let see how it goes, I hope it is Yuri

I feel like I've seen this premise a bunch of times now (such as Sexiled or Roll Over and Die) and I feel like we need one of these to take its time before the girl gets kicked out of the hero party. Without any buildup they just keep having not much weight to what happens, though of course having buildup means the story wouldn't get to the premise as quick, but fronting it all in the first chapter makes it just feel like a shoddy way to make the audience feel bad for the character while putting them in a situation where they can be more free.

 

[Robinisback]

The amount of time I spent trying to make sense out of what was drawn in this panel was crazy, I genuinely thought whether this was a headless girl with a pair of boobs, turns out it was a first person view, lol.

She gets kicked out and the first thing she encounters is Yuri? Coincidence? I think not.
We need more female members of the Hero's party to be kicked out, guys.

 

[Shtoops]

Thanks for the TL. Although you should probably center justify the text in the text bubbles. Nice work.

 

[mangaburner1979]

I feel like I've seen this premise a bunch of times now (such as Sexiled or Roll Over and Die) and I feel like we need one of these to take its time before the girl gets kicked out of the hero party. Without any buildup they just keep having not much weight to what happens, though of course having buildup means the story wouldn't get to the premise as quick, but fronting it all in the first chapter makes it just feel like a shoddy way to make the audience feel bad for the character while putting them in a situation where they can be more free.

I agree, I wish these types of stories had the narrative patience of something like Dungeon Meshi. I think part of might be that all of those are light novel adaptations with the pacing flaws that can come with them along with the pressures of capturing the reader's attention in the first chapter. But that doesn't mean that it couldn't be done properly. One potential approach could be to have the first chapter run long, grounding it in the MC's insecurities about her power while fleshing out relationships with other party members. Build up the anticipation to the boss battle in the first 10-20 pages rather than throwing us in immediately, with the first chapter ending in the MC's party's complete failure because of MC's alleged mistakes. Maybe add in a little "I am so getting kicked out of the party" thought bubble or box on the last page. Then next chapter she can get kicked out of the party.

Digression aside- even compared to others with the same premise, this one in particular was sloppily told on a plot, art, and sequential narrative level. Characterization is weak. Facial and body expressions are mostly stiff and lack dynamics. Action sequences are visually murky and difficult to follow with not enough panels to give a clear picture of what's happening. The non-action sequences are not much better in the panels chosen to tell the story, but they're at least readable. The level of fan service is also so egregious that it ruins the impact of several panels which are supposed to have emotional weight.

 

[Orangechrisy]

I agree, I wish these types of stories had the narrative patience of something like Dungeon Meshi...

Yeah, a real long chapter 1 to flesh things out more would certainly help, or doing something like Dungeon Meshi where you subvert the plot partway through, would be great.

Digression aside- even compared to others with the same premise, this one in particular was sloppily told on a plot, art, and sequential narrative level...

Heavily agreed, I had to read through the chapter twice to figure out what was actually going on.

 

[welcome2atlantis]

I suddenly want to pet a cat. A fluffy cat. With fluffy ears and tail.